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Submitted on
December 23, 2012
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Floating by Inoki-Sakaeru Floating by Inoki-Sakaeru
"Through ART thee see the unseen,
hear the unheard, feel the unfelt,
experience the unimaginable." ~Myself
This piece is very interesting. Firstly with the technique I see all parts of the work are a good relative quality and are in focus well enough. I felt the red and white ribbon could have been sharper using a vector source.

The combination of the spiro-graph lines and drawn images make parts look like a British bank note. I wouldn't be surprised to see this as a special 5 pound note. The colours of the lines are striking, clear and don't clash much with the many colours behind them.

The background is nicely colour co-ordinated, we get a shift between blue, red and white as the focus drifts from the background to the foreground.

Emotively this piece makes me feel like all of this noise and bountiful commotion is coming from our main figure. We are seeing her artistic expressions and learning how busy a dialectic artists have going on in their heads.

I love the quote, it's a great quote and goes well with the image depiction. It's colour could be made to stand out more by using bold and either stroked lines or a box.

Overall, I love this piece; it's a great combination of elements and a good composition.
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